Right now, I'm concerned about how I'm writing one particular manuscript.
In essence, it's a lot like watching the movie The Longest Day where there are many characters who each have a role in what is clearly a larger picture. The story I'm writing has multiple characters in different locations. Only a few characters come into contact with others. Others are connected by those who do.
By the way, the scene changes within each chapter are frequent. In other words, each chapter is not devoted to only one locale and set of characters. A character might appear in several scenes within one chapter and then not reappear until a few chapters later. What I'm trying to portray is activities taking place at the same time in different places since the story isn't at all like a boardgame where sides take turns moving. Also I'm implying the passage of time when a character isn't mentioned since I doubt that anyone wants to read how a character does goes about his routine until he arrives at a new location where new encounters take place.
Basically, I'd like to know how others view this style.
In essence, it's a lot like watching the movie The Longest Day where there are many characters who each have a role in what is clearly a larger picture. The story I'm writing has multiple characters in different locations. Only a few characters come into contact with others. Others are connected by those who do.
By the way, the scene changes within each chapter are frequent. In other words, each chapter is not devoted to only one locale and set of characters. A character might appear in several scenes within one chapter and then not reappear until a few chapters later. What I'm trying to portray is activities taking place at the same time in different places since the story isn't at all like a boardgame where sides take turns moving. Also I'm implying the passage of time when a character isn't mentioned since I doubt that anyone wants to read how a character does goes about his routine until he arrives at a new location where new encounters take place.
Basically, I'd like to know how others view this style.