Is it mint condition...

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Branwyn

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A sleek 1969, black, mint-condition Mercury Cougar.
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A sleek 1969, black, mint-conditioned Mercury Cougar.

And I need comma help!:Hug2: Thanks.

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I would rearrange the sentence so that "1969 Mercury Cougar" is together--that's the particular car model, the rest describes it.
 
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