20 word poem challenge

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I think this thread didn't make it to the new board, so I am reposting it, along with the poems that have been made so far.


CHALLENGE: Use these 20 words (obtained from magnet poetry kit), ALL of these 20 words, and ONLY these 20 words to make a poem:


desire
dreams
stained
love
man

consumed
of
of
delicious
hot
sacrificed
awakening
by
by
cliffs
on
pinned
blood
fire
Prometheus




Zazopolis wrote:






Delicious, hot blood of Prometheus


Desire of fire, stained by dreamsAwakening by cliffs, pinned on love
Man consumed, sacrificed







wurdwise wrote:






cliffs of dreams, delicious desire


awakening of hot bloodpinned on by man, consumed by fire
Prometheus sacrificed stained love







maestrowork wrote:





Dreams of man,


desire of Prometheus
love by blood
consumed by fire
hot, pinned, awakening
Sacrificed on cliffs
stained
delicious




skylarburris wrote:

Prometheus dreams
Of delicious fire,
Awakening pinned
By hot desire,
Sacrificed
On bloodstained cliffs,
Consumed
By love of man.




Any more takers?
 
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mandyscott1997

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PROMETHEUS ON CLIFFS OF LOVE

DESIRE CONSUMED BY MAN

DREAMS STAINED BY BLOOD

SACRIFICE AWAKENING

PINNED ON HOT FIRE
 

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Wow, I love prompts and challenges, but nothing I came up with on that list was satisfactory. Next!
 

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sacrificed by fire;
consumed, delicious -
man stained by love
pinned on desire,
awakening Prometheus…

dreams of cliffs,
of hot blood.
 

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love of Prometheus
hot fire
delicious blood,
dreams of man
consumed by desire
stained by sacrificed
pinned on cliffs
awakening…
 

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Prometheus pinned by dreams of desire,

Awakening on cliffs, blood stained;

Sacrificed hot, delicious fire,

Consumed by love of man.
 

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Twenty word poem

:Coffee: Man consumed by awakened
desire Prometheus sacrificed
dreams of love by
hot fire of blood
stained cliffs.

This was fun to do. Interesting excercise.
 

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stained by blood pinned on man
Prometheus consumed by awakening desire
cliffs of love sacraficed dreams of delicous hot fire


desire
dreams
stained
love
man

consumed
of
of
delicious
hot
sacrificed
awakening
by
by
cliffs
on
pinned
blood
fire
Prometheus





 

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Love.
Awakening Man sacrificed, pinned by Prometheus
on hot blood-stained cliffs,
Consumed by dreams of desire, of delicious fire.
 

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My version:

man consumed by delicious desire of
hot fire awakening dreams pinned
Blood of Prometheus on cliffs stained by sacrificed love
 

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Prometheus dreams of hot delicious love man

stained of blood sacrificed by desire

awakening pinned on fire consumed cliffs


Wow! What a man! :LilLove:

 

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Love stained dreams of men
by fire consumed,
sacrificed,
hot blood on cliffs.
Awakening of Prometheus
pinned by delicious desire.
 

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pinned by desire,
man consumed of love;
dreams stained by sacrifice;

of awakening on cliffs of blood,
of hot, delicious, fire...of Prometheus









 

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Prometheus,
Pinned by cliffs,
Stained by hot blood,
Dreams of desires awakening.
Man,
On fire,
Consumed of delicious love
Sacrificed.
 

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Prometheus
man awakening
consumed by
strained desire


delicious dreams of blood
on cliffs
of sacrified love
pinned by hot fire
 

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Prometheus

Consumed by delicious desire —
Love of man
Awakening of hot fire
Prometheus sacrificed
Pinned on cliffs
Stained by blood
Dreams