After I posted the opening to my second book in SYW, I started overthinking the beginning of my first book--the one I'm going to be subbing to agents ASAP. I think the beginning of my second story really sparkles, which made me worry that the first is somehow lacking. Perhaps it's because the MCs are very different people or perhaps it's because it IS somehow lacking... anyway... I'd appreciate some feedback one way or the other: http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=79272
~Trish
~Trish