She's 7 but she writes like a champ.

It's better than some published novels I've seen...

Oh my! That is the cutest! Good story line, excellent representation of conflict--I mean, really, how can he be happy when he never gets his elouints?

Thanks for sharing. Make sure to post book two in the series. I'm dying to know if mr. Broun will come back to life.

Wow, someone's hooked on phonics.

I love "elouints" -- it took me a minute, but I figgiditout. That's sweet, Tez. No surprise there; we know her mom.

writerterri said:

It's in my sig just incase you didn't see it.

I'm still laughing.

Enjoy!

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All work and no play makes Mr. Brown...

I'm still waiting for my elouints.

Look out, though. Even if Mr. Broun was a fattyboombalatty, that sharks's still gonna be hungry. I smell trilogy...

Yes, Dork...but I got all into the MR. BROWN CAN MOO, CAN YOU thing in my head. Hence the spelling error on my part. Tell her to take a chill pill if she don't like it.

What! Did I miss something...or is it that I am just dense...

writerterri said:

Glad you said it first.


It's the best flash fiction I've ever read.

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Well, someone had to say it.

rubarbb said:

What! Did I miss something...or is it that I am just dense...

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Oh please. Don't open yourself up like that. I just thought of 17 dense jokes, but I will let it go THIS TIME. WERRI'S sig line has a story in it that her daughter wrote...

writerterri said:

dense


Look in my sig!

dork.

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I tried to be a bit nicer, but that works too.

No more Mr. Clee eee eeeen!

Did Mr. Broun perchance have a relation named Brown who was considered a wonder? It was rumored he could make a sound like thunder.

Mr. Clean scares me.

Parkinsonsd said:

Did Mr. Broun perchance have a relation named Brown who was considered a wonder? It was rumored he could make a sound like thunder.

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That's the same frickin' thing I was thinking. I thought I heard a goldfish kiss?

WAY better than anything I've ever written!

I cared about Mr. Broun... I was angry when he didn't get his elouints and I cried when he was eaten by the shark.




If only Mr. Broun had gotten his elouints... Sharks are known to be suckers for a bribe.

JoNightshade said:

Wow, someone's hooked on phonics.

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poetinahat said:

I love "elouints" -- it took me a minute, but I figgiditout. That's sweet, Tez. No surprise there; we know her mom.

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rubarbb said:

What! Did I miss something...or is it that I am just dense...

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I had to read it several times, and I only figured it out in context: Mr. Broun's elouints was what he would have got for doing his chors. But he didn't live to see that day.

Very good creative spelling there.