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....using ONLY lines from your WIP.

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I’m losing it, man. I’m turning into her.
 

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. It suddenly occurred to me that I sounded exactly like a mental patient.

“And you listen to me. You are not going crazy. You are going through a damn rough time, but you are not crazy. Now stop crying.”
 

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“And you listen to me. You are not going crazy. You are going through a damn rough time, but you are not crazy. Now stop crying.”

My eyes scanned the room and when it became clear that everyone was not only looking at me, but was in fact getting ready to tackle me in case I grabbed something sharp, I turned.

I'm cracking up over here!
 

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This is really addictive.

“Where are you? Are you safe?”


Now I’m stuck on the doorstep of my apartment building staring back into the bushy eyebrows of Tony Rigatoni.


Thank God a wrote a bunch today:)
 

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Now I’m stuck on the doorstep of my apartment building staring back into the bushy eyebrows of Tony Rigatoni.


Thank God a wrote a bunch today:)

He led, and looked back at me with a smile and a wiggle of his eyebrows. His pupils were so dilated I was surprised there was any light left for the rest of us.
 

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I stared at him, trying to figure out if he was teasing, but I could see tiny beads of sweat on his oversized forehead. Gross.
 

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I put my hand on his forehead. “You do feel a little hot.”
 

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Griffin sighed the way only a nauseous person could. “I don’t know, man.”
 

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“Are you okay?” Frank asked, furrowing his sweaty brow.

[FONT=&quot]"I’m sorry… I just feel helpless…"[/FONT]
 
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