Stephenie Hovland
Normally, when I find -ing words starting sentences I can change them around. It just sounds better not to use to many of them. But, the short assignment (for a writing class) I'm working on now is full of them. Can you give me some ways to re-word them? Here's an example:
Spreading two fences apart, I barely fit through the narrow opening between the sharp teeth of the barbed wire.
Btw, I thought they were gerunds, but is that the correct terminology for these -ing words?
And - I've read that a person's writing is usually better if they get rid of all -ing words used in this manner. Do you agree?
Stephenie
Spreading two fences apart, I barely fit through the narrow opening between the sharp teeth of the barbed wire.
Btw, I thought they were gerunds, but is that the correct terminology for these -ing words?
And - I've read that a person's writing is usually better if they get rid of all -ing words used in this manner. Do you agree?
Stephenie