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nancy sv
08-28-2007, 01:57 AM
I've posted a short, one-page section of my book over in the Share YOur Work forum. I'm really struggling with this particular bit and am in desperate need of help. If you wouldn't mind giving a read and letting me know how I can fix it, I would really appreciate it!



Little Red Barn
08-28-2007, 02:49 AM
Well I'm not a critter, but I do feel that you have the basis of a very interesting book on hand!!!

Best of luck, someone will come along shortly, who is qualified to critique! :)

nancy sv
08-28-2007, 03:31 AM
Thanks Kimmi! I do think it will be a wonderful book if I can pull it off. It's the pulling it off that's the hard part!

Little Red Barn
08-28-2007, 03:46 AM
Nancy, I do think you have something here, really like it... :)