I am truly stuck here, and I'd appreciate some ideas and opinions.
I have a first-draft historical novel set in Mesopotamia 3,000 BCE. My first two MS readers complained of getting disoriented. So, I considered the time travel device to put a 21st Century perspective on the almost alien life style of a post-neolithic civilization on the cusp of such discoveries as the wheel and writing.
I'm familiar with Gabaldon's works and the device she uses to put a contemporary reader in the midst of her time period. But to me, time-travel involves a fairly radical suspension of disbelief, whereas I'm striving for realism that reflects anthropological finds of nascent Sumerian and neighboring cultures during the past 80 years.
Wilbur Smith is successful, but his "River God" and other depictions of ancient Egypt don't move me, and I wonder how much of his excruciating detail appeals to contemporary readers. He mixes adventure with authenticity, but I don't think he's a powerful writer.
I guess my dilemma is, can I make my "invented" world a compelling read with a dramatic story and strong characters alone? Or do I need to insert a 21st Century character with his POV and knowledge of where things will wind up?
I have a first-draft historical novel set in Mesopotamia 3,000 BCE. My first two MS readers complained of getting disoriented. So, I considered the time travel device to put a 21st Century perspective on the almost alien life style of a post-neolithic civilization on the cusp of such discoveries as the wheel and writing.
I'm familiar with Gabaldon's works and the device she uses to put a contemporary reader in the midst of her time period. But to me, time-travel involves a fairly radical suspension of disbelief, whereas I'm striving for realism that reflects anthropological finds of nascent Sumerian and neighboring cultures during the past 80 years.
Wilbur Smith is successful, but his "River God" and other depictions of ancient Egypt don't move me, and I wonder how much of his excruciating detail appeals to contemporary readers. He mixes adventure with authenticity, but I don't think he's a powerful writer.
I guess my dilemma is, can I make my "invented" world a compelling read with a dramatic story and strong characters alone? Or do I need to insert a 21st Century character with his POV and knowledge of where things will wind up?
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