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Okay. I've got myself a quandary I'm hoping you all could help me out with.
Basically, I feel that my first chapter tries to introduce too much at once. I have some ideas for how to handle most of the information overload, but there's one section that is giving me fits.
This section introduces the various unit types of the Roman army, describing their armor and weaponry, their ages, the classes of society from which they are drawn, etc. Yes, it is every bit as dry and "expositiony" as it sounds. Unfortunately, it is also critical to understanding the later battles.
I'm thinking of handling this problem by gradually expanding my MC's POV, and leaving the introduction of the various classes of infantry until he finds himself in the position of commanding them.
Has anybody here done anything similar, expanding a character's awareness to encompass a broader "view" of the world around him/her? I think it fits in this case, as he gains experience and takes on more and more responsibility, but at the same time I'm hesitant that holding back the details of the army could make them jarring to the reader when they are introduced.
Basically, I feel that my first chapter tries to introduce too much at once. I have some ideas for how to handle most of the information overload, but there's one section that is giving me fits.
This section introduces the various unit types of the Roman army, describing their armor and weaponry, their ages, the classes of society from which they are drawn, etc. Yes, it is every bit as dry and "expositiony" as it sounds. Unfortunately, it is also critical to understanding the later battles.
I'm thinking of handling this problem by gradually expanding my MC's POV, and leaving the introduction of the various classes of infantry until he finds himself in the position of commanding them.
Has anybody here done anything similar, expanding a character's awareness to encompass a broader "view" of the world around him/her? I think it fits in this case, as he gains experience and takes on more and more responsibility, but at the same time I'm hesitant that holding back the details of the army could make them jarring to the reader when they are introduced.