The agent requested a partial of my romantic fantasy and so I sent one out. Today the rejection letter came back.
"While I thought the premise of the story to be interesting, I felt that over-all, the story lacked the depth that I was looking for. It seemed that you could have taken the reader a bit deeper into the characters and especially the heroine early on in the story. We need to have a reason to cheer for her from page 1."
That was depressing, especially since I felt the heroine was one of my strongest female characters. Plus, if keeping your composure and self-control after you're handed over to a man who immediately orders you to strip naked isn't cheer-worthy, I don't know what is. Oh well, I suppose this is an exercise in maintaining my own composure as well. I just wish I didn't like this book so much; maybe that way the rejection wouldn't bother me.
"While I thought the premise of the story to be interesting, I felt that over-all, the story lacked the depth that I was looking for. It seemed that you could have taken the reader a bit deeper into the characters and especially the heroine early on in the story. We need to have a reason to cheer for her from page 1."
That was depressing, especially since I felt the heroine was one of my strongest female characters. Plus, if keeping your composure and self-control after you're handed over to a man who immediately orders you to strip naked isn't cheer-worthy, I don't know what is. Oh well, I suppose this is an exercise in maintaining my own composure as well. I just wish I didn't like this book so much; maybe that way the rejection wouldn't bother me.