killerkellerh
1st Person POV & Tense - Having Issues
Hi. I'm new. I just going and have some things to ask. :snoopy
Here is the issue at hand. i am working on my first 1st person pov novel...it is a mystery...shocker, i know. I am struggling with the TENSE in my 1st person pov narrative.
It comes down to things like this (lame, I know, but it shows the problem):
"I see him pick up the coffee mug, drink it. He is a nice person"
vs
"I saw him pick up the coffee mug, and he drank it. He is a nice person."
:head
I am concerned about being consistent with my tense. In the second one, there are actually two tenses with "was" and "is" because he picked up the mug (past) but he is a nice person (currently and still)...does this work?
I am confused. What are your thoughts?
Thanks,
keller
Hi. I'm new. I just going and have some things to ask. :snoopy
Here is the issue at hand. i am working on my first 1st person pov novel...it is a mystery...shocker, i know. I am struggling with the TENSE in my 1st person pov narrative.
It comes down to things like this (lame, I know, but it shows the problem):
"I see him pick up the coffee mug, drink it. He is a nice person"
vs
"I saw him pick up the coffee mug, and he drank it. He is a nice person."
:head
I am concerned about being consistent with my tense. In the second one, there are actually two tenses with "was" and "is" because he picked up the mug (past) but he is a nice person (currently and still)...does this work?
I am confused. What are your thoughts?
Thanks,
keller