macalicious731
Okay, I have POV issues. It's probably my biggest writing weakness.
Example:
Dick looked at Jane. He thought she was unhappy.
-OR-
Dick looked at Jane. She was unhappy.
In the second group of sentences, is it one POV or two? I find "he thought" to be a part of the unnecessary word category. Granted, "he thought" is a different definition from just "was." But if the first sentence is used as more of an introduction, then I would think both groups of sentences are still just one POV....
Thanks! Sorry if there's any confusion... my head is muddled.
Example:
Dick looked at Jane. He thought she was unhappy.
-OR-
Dick looked at Jane. She was unhappy.
In the second group of sentences, is it one POV or two? I find "he thought" to be a part of the unnecessary word category. Granted, "he thought" is a different definition from just "was." But if the first sentence is used as more of an introduction, then I would think both groups of sentences are still just one POV....
Thanks! Sorry if there's any confusion... my head is muddled.