JC Lynch
I am writing a novel in a limited third person POV, that changes from section to section, so that the reader may experience the internal dialogue of one particular character at a time. When a friend of mine who is a rhetoric professor read it, he had issue with a few word choices, that he felt should not belong to the narrator.
For instance, when one of the lead characters (who is a racist) encounters people of southern European heritage, that section of the narrative refers to them as hunkies, or bohunks. Now should such deragatory terms only be used when the character is clearly thinking about them (seperated from the rest of the text by italics), or is it alright to use the term throughout that section?
I hope this question makes sense.
For instance, when one of the lead characters (who is a racist) encounters people of southern European heritage, that section of the narrative refers to them as hunkies, or bohunks. Now should such deragatory terms only be used when the character is clearly thinking about them (seperated from the rest of the text by italics), or is it alright to use the term throughout that section?
I hope this question makes sense.