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Hi everyone,
I have a quick question. And if you all know me, you know my definition of 'quick' doesn't seem to match up with the dictionary definition.
Anyway, I have this novel, and I'm working on the 2nd Draft. The bad guy is one of the MCs and I wanted to show how evil he really was when I wrote this work. The problem is, I feel like I might have written him too evil. In a couple places, he takes his violent tendencies against children. One of the incidents is integral to the plot and can't be completely taken out; the other incident is not so integral and involves an infant.
So my question is, should I take these portions of my work out? I'm uncomfortable with a lot of what this bad guy does, but at the same time I'm especially squeamish about the portions with kids involved. I think I might have been just a bit overzealous when I wrote these portions of the bad guy's, well, badness.
What say you? Should I remove the one part of the story and perhaps change the part that's more important to the story, or should I leave these parts alone?
Thanks in advance for all your answers. I appreciate you all and your help very much.
I have a quick question. And if you all know me, you know my definition of 'quick' doesn't seem to match up with the dictionary definition.
Anyway, I have this novel, and I'm working on the 2nd Draft. The bad guy is one of the MCs and I wanted to show how evil he really was when I wrote this work. The problem is, I feel like I might have written him too evil. In a couple places, he takes his violent tendencies against children. One of the incidents is integral to the plot and can't be completely taken out; the other incident is not so integral and involves an infant.
So my question is, should I take these portions of my work out? I'm uncomfortable with a lot of what this bad guy does, but at the same time I'm especially squeamish about the portions with kids involved. I think I might have been just a bit overzealous when I wrote these portions of the bad guy's, well, badness.
What say you? Should I remove the one part of the story and perhaps change the part that's more important to the story, or should I leave these parts alone?
Thanks in advance for all your answers. I appreciate you all and your help very much.