Age limit for MC / re-categorising a novel as YA?

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A few years ago I wrote a novel that's approximately 65k in length going by MS Word's word count. It's not a trunk novel, not that bad. But it needs some heavy editing.

Anyway, the heroine starts off at 16 years old and the book ends on her 20th birthday. To cut a mid-length story short, I'd classify it as romance/drama (as in family problems, parental divorce, blah blah...) I remember reading in this forum that young readers prefer to read about characters who are older than or the same age as them but is ending a book on the character's 20th birthday too old?

I've recently begun reading YA novels and realised, this book to which I'm referring isn't chick-lit at all - it could, I think, be re-written and marketed as YA.

So I guess I'm just running a few things by my fellow AW-ers, to see what you think.

There's mention of drug taking (in passing) and homosexuality (again in passing. One of the characters is gay but there's not much made of it. A girl makes a pass at him and can't figure out why he would dare say no). This is the one novel I wrote without using a single swear-word.

There's mention of sex, or rather, it's hinted at. The MC loses her virginity but the scene stops at the bedroom door and shows her emotional state afterwards (deep regret, seeking advice from a responsible adult).

It seemed a bit 'junior' to be chick-lit when I finished it but you know what they say, write the book you want to read. I did, but it didn't seem to fit into romance, or adult chick lit...anyway, does that sound like YA to you, as regards the length (it'll probably be somewhere round 60k after I juggle about with a few chapters) and subject matter?
 

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Sounds like it to me. I think the length is about right, and the subject matter is certainly nothing that other YA authors have shied away from. I've also heard that YA readers want to read about characters just a bit older than themselves.

Can you post a brief synopsis? This might help with categorizing your story.
 
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Synopsis would take a bit of work but I think you've confirmed what I've suspected for a while - maybe I'm not an adult novelist (that always sounds like porn!!!) at all, but am naturally a YA writer.

Some things I've written wouldn't be suitable for YA but I seem to lean towards mid-late teens protagonists with subject matter I liked to read about as a teen.

Thing is, I read Stoker and Bronte at the age of 7-8, so I'm a bit mixed up as to what applies to which age group. I was a bookworm from the get-go, so I've never really progressed from one genre or age-group to another. I've always read everything!
 

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Sounds like a perfect YA for me. DEFINITELY not too risque (possibly a bit tame, actually) and the age is not a problem.
 

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Synopsis would take a bit of work but I think you've confirmed what I've suspected for a while - maybe I'm not an adult novelist (that always sounds like porn!!!) at all, but am naturally a YA writer.

Some things I've written wouldn't be suitable for YA but I seem to lean towards mid-late teens protagonists with subject matter I liked to read about as a teen.

Thing is, I read Stoker and Bronte at the age of 7-8, so I'm a bit mixed up as to what applies to which age group. I was a bookworm from the get-go, so I've never really progressed from one genre or age-group to another. I've always read everything!

I recently realized the same thing about myself and my writing! Even as I get older (nearing 40...), I am still most interested in teen characters and issues; I have a hard time caring about the trials and dramas of adults (you're an adult, for chrissakes -- get over it! ) :D

During a discussion with a writer friend, I joked that, since all my main characters were teens, maybe that meant that I still felt like an awkward adolescent myself. She said it made perfect sense, though. In every single job I've had since college, I have worked with teens, either as a teacher or counselor.

Yeah, I'm a YA writer. Hope this helps.
 

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Sounds like YA to me. Actually, YA is much more tolerant of language and subject matter than MG, which is geared to the 9-12 yo crowd. Taking a teen through her later teen years sounds like just the thing.
 

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Thing is, I read Stoker and Bronte at the age of 7-8, so I'm a bit mixed up as to what applies to which age group. I was a bookworm from the get-go, so I've never really progressed from one genre or age-group to another. I've always read everything!

I took Danielle Steel to class when I was ten. I didn't want to read stuff written for my age... So now I'm writing what I would have loved to read as a kid. Realistic, non sugarcoated, nothing too sappy.

That's what I'm writing now - and that sounds like what you're writing. Sounds YA to me...
 

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Teen topics

I remember as a teen (back when acid washed jeans were very cool!) reading adult romance books because they were, well, juicy. I think your ideas are perfect. Teen books do have some 'adult' topics like violence and sexuality. Examples of books teachers hand out to their students, Lord of the Flies, and Romeo and Juliet... etc also address those topics. Go for it!
 

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I can totally relate to your new revelations Scarlet. I gravitate towards YA writing because I want to re-explore what it was that made me want to read in the first place. I almost feel like I want to pay homage to stories that inspired me first up. The books I read (apart from the usual Famous Five, Nancy Drew) were more adult too. I read The Shining when I was about 12 and just devoured horror and bad ass teen drug stories (e.g Go Ask Alice) from then on. Hence the things I write now always seem to have a dark leaning--which is fine by me. So personally, as a 16 yo, I would have devoured anything to do with an MC on the cusp of or emerging as an adult.
 

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sounds YA to me

Sounds perfect for YA. Nothing seems to be taboo in YA. I agree with the previous poster. Had this genre been more prevalent when I was a teen i would have been reading it. I mainly read adult books from age 11 on. I think the first one I read was the Other. (man, am I dating myself). Maybe that's why I write YA as well. I want to write what I would have loved to read (and still do love to read...I mostly read YA!) back then.
 

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Seems perfectly okay YA to me. Go for it and good luck.
 

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There's mention of sex, or rather, it's hinted at. The MC loses her virginity but the scene stops at the bedroom door and shows her emotional state afterwards (deep regret, seeking advice from a responsible adult).

That last bit makes it sound a touch moralistic, and the MC having to rely on adult advice rather than coming to her own conclusion might go against you in YA fiction. YA fiction is really about the main character making decision and taking control themselves - ie, becoming an adult in their way, and by their rules - even if that means they end up a coke-addicted waster of an adult.

I totally relate to your revelation in reading YA books though. I thought I wanted to write crime fiction and fell into the YA world by mistake. YA books don't cross over to adult fiction anywhere near as much as they should.
 
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In which case, could she seek advice from a friend her own age rather than a 'responsible adult'?
 
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Hmm, she has a small group of friends her own age but the group breaks up, which upsets her, causes her to run into the arms of some guy, so...

Aw, I'll work something out. It's not my current WIP anyway. Plenty thinking time while I work on something else. :)
 
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