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Newyorkknicks07
06-04-2007, 05:37 AM
Yup. It's a rap verse by Immortal Technique. Now, even if you don't like rap, i think you need to pay attention to this verse

I pledge no aledgence brotha fuck the presidents speeches
I'm baptized by america and covered in leeches
The dirty water that preaches your soul and your facial features
Drownin you in propaganda that they spit through the speakers
And if you talk about the evil that the government does
The Patriot Act attracts you to the type that you love
They try to frame you and say you was tryin' to sell drugs
Throw Federal Inditctements on brothas to show you love
This shit is run by fake christians and fake poloticians
Look at they're mansions and look at the conditions you live in
All they talk about is Terrorism on television
They tell you to listen
But they don't really tell you they mission
They funded AL Queda
And then they blamed the muslim religion
even though Bin Laden was a CIA Taction
They gave him millions of dollars and they funded his purpose
Fareignheight 9/11 that's just scratchin the surface

Magdalen
06-11-2007, 09:33 PM
Very profound!
Right on brotha.
Power to the people.
I'm not much for rap, but you are making some really important statements here that are lost in the long lines. Focus on the ryhmes by making them the end of lines, and then your meaning you won't smother, Brother! (Not sure what to do with the red part)

I pledge no aledgence
brotha fuck the presidents speeches
I'm baptized by america and covered in leeches
The dirty water that preaches
your soul and your facial features
Drownin you in propaganda
that they spit through the speakers
And if you talk about the evil that the government does
The Patriot Act attracts you to the type that you love
They try to frame you and say you was tryin' to sell drugs
Throw Federal Inditctements on brothas to show you love
This shit is run by fake christians
and fake poloticians
Look at they're mansions
and look at the conditions
you live in
All they talk about is Terrorism
on television
They tell you to listen
But they don't really tell you they mission
They funded AL Queda
And then they blamed
the muslim religion
even though Bin Laden was a CIA Taction
They gave him millions
of dollars and they funded his purpose
Fareignheight 9/11
that's just scratchin the surface


Is it asking too much for you to use the spell check?

aledgence, Inditctements,poloticians,they're, AL Queda,
Fareignheight