Could you please move this thread to "Getting with the Genre" subboards?
I think that would be more appropriate ...
(SYW is hard enough ... let them yap about this kind of stuff over in those other places ... Yeah, I got a real, real, reeeealllll gooooood answer: Try 2nd person. Or stream-of-consciousness. with plenty of young angst. yeah, that's the ticket. Yap about the pros and cons of using 2nd person.)