Plot.
Sure I'll read it! As you can see I'm working on three (doesn't mean I'm an expert), but 250 pgs. does seem a bit long. I'll defanitely look over it and critique it.
Thanks, Ed.
And congrats on your own work!
I'll send you a link in a PM.
Do you like a truthful critic or a sappy one?
-Ed Faris.
I like truthful yet nice (no nasty and snide remarks from the teacher i red ink, please).
Try dividing your critique into three (no!) FOUR sections:
1) The nit-picky and needed crappy nonsense about spelling, grammar, punctuation, and proper Hollwyood formatting. I'm a terrible speller, and I also make bad typos. And as for formatting, I admit I cheated a few margins (I know you can get in trouble for that, but I did it anyway.)
2) The equally nit-picky and needed and yet not-so-crappy stuff of plot, character motivation, common sense facts from real life --or (in other words) OVERALL BELIEVABILITY!!!! Such as:
"Ummmmmmm .... while I don't own any firearms, I'm pretty sure that a semi-automatic gun does NOT use a revolving chamber, nor does it even have a hammer that needs to be cocked," and
"Hanging someone from the ceiling by their arms will usualy induce death by suffocation in 6 hours or less. So I don't think he could have hung there for three whole days and still survived." (BTW, none of this stuff happens in my script.
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And did my sheriff make the right decision to NOT assign a body guard? Do you BELIEVE the sheriff was stupid enough to not assign a body guard? Or did your ability to suspend disbelief get tossed out the window at that point?
3) Craft. Is my dialogue good? Is my setting good? Is there forward momentum to the plot? Is it even remotely comprehensible to read?
4) Here's the part that's important to any writer: the emotional impact the story holds for you, the sense that it's not only a very GOOD story, it's also a very ORIGINAL story, not one you've seen before. This is the part of your critique where you MUST be honest. If the story's no good, then all the spell-checks and fact-checks won't mean anything. If the story is been-there-done-that, if it's uninspiring, if it doesn't make you laugh and cry and in any way move you, then I need to scrap it and push on to the next idea. And if you see a PIECE of anything at all that's worthwhile in it, like maybe I have HALF a story, and I need to scrape off the extraneous crap and focus on the diamond buried beneath all the superflous nonsens, then show me the one piece of originality and sincerity in this thing than can be salvaged, and I'll re-work it from there.
Thanks again
--PD