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... Or not?
Here is a plot summary:
'A long time ago, a race of warriors walked the Earth. As the Immortals realised that their continent's chief city would be destroyed by a race of evil snaggle-toothed wild Dwarves, they imprisoned a key in the minds of heroes. The first hero was too likely and hunted by Uloogian Warriors. The second was evil, and tried to use his power to crush the world, and he was kileld in battle. The third was eaten by a Dragon at the last stage of the awakening of the Dwarves, which the Immortals required if they were to destroy them, as prophecy proclaimed. The Immortals were desperate, so they engraved the key into the mind of a farming people, the least likely to lead an empire.'
I've been told online by about te different sources that it sounds cliche and incredibly unfulfilling. I've also been told that the plot of my book has been done-to-death, and is a pale Tolkien immitation.
First off, this plot is nothing like ANY of Tolkien's work so this annoys me. Then, in which books/films has this plot been done-to-death in?
Here is a plot summary:
'A long time ago, a race of warriors walked the Earth. As the Immortals realised that their continent's chief city would be destroyed by a race of evil snaggle-toothed wild Dwarves, they imprisoned a key in the minds of heroes. The first hero was too likely and hunted by Uloogian Warriors. The second was evil, and tried to use his power to crush the world, and he was kileld in battle. The third was eaten by a Dragon at the last stage of the awakening of the Dwarves, which the Immortals required if they were to destroy them, as prophecy proclaimed. The Immortals were desperate, so they engraved the key into the mind of a farming people, the least likely to lead an empire.'
I've been told online by about te different sources that it sounds cliche and incredibly unfulfilling. I've also been told that the plot of my book has been done-to-death, and is a pale Tolkien immitation.
First off, this plot is nothing like ANY of Tolkien's work so this annoys me. Then, in which books/films has this plot been done-to-death in?