So where the hell you been for a month Mike? So this aint a poem? I bet it would make a hell of a song-trouble is I can't hear the music yet-whadaya think? Are there chorusesesusses in songs anymore-never mind the chorus feel the verse-just babbling here on your thread-you gonna visit us more often? Now ignore that all and take a hearty welcome back Mike!!!!
Hey Dave. I was going to put this in the poetry section, but hesitated because I haven't been around to contribute. You can't just post there without adding to the forum in other ways. While this is the case with all of the forums here, it is more pronounced there.
I've been working on my MS. I have the query ready. If I'm not finished revising this by the end of the week, call me out on it. It will never be perfect, but I always find something I'm not fully comfortable with.
About the chorus? Repeat the first verse and last line. I've written so many lyrics over the years. Just call me lazy. The music is very hard rock.
I stopped by
Poetry Critique yesterday and commented on someone's post. While GF gave me a rep point for my comments, he said I was too soft. I guess he doesn't know me that well.
Mike