This idea was vaugely caused by my "most important part" thread. I'm sending myself on tangents...
What makes a good beginning really work? Be it a short story, or a novel, you know a good beginning when you read one, but you don't always know a bad one. this is because a bad beginning fails to engage you. Therefore, you don't think "why am I not interested?" because you're not interested. You haven't been stirred to think about it, except in extreme cases.
I am, below, going to excerpt an old Roger Zelazny story called Tower of Ice. No matter your genre, you can do worse than read Roger Zelazny.
In what way does this beginning bit work? Does it work? are you interested? Engaged? Why?
Are you NOT interested and engaged? Then tell me why not too.
(it's a great story; good luck finding a copy anymore...)
How does it work? From first sentence to last sentence, how does it work?
What makes a good beginning really work? Be it a short story, or a novel, you know a good beginning when you read one, but you don't always know a bad one. this is because a bad beginning fails to engage you. Therefore, you don't think "why am I not interested?" because you're not interested. You haven't been stirred to think about it, except in extreme cases.
I am, below, going to excerpt an old Roger Zelazny story called Tower of Ice. No matter your genre, you can do worse than read Roger Zelazny.
In what way does this beginning bit work? Does it work? are you interested? Engaged? Why?
Are you NOT interested and engaged? Then tell me why not too.
The dark, horse-shaped beast paused on the icy trail. Head turned to the left and upward, it regarded the cstle atop the glistening mountain, as did its rider.
"No," the man finally stated.
The black beast continued on, ice cracking beneath its cloven metal hoofs, snow blowing about it.
"I'm beginning to suspect that there is no trail," the beast announced after a time. "We've come more than halfway around."
"I know," replied the muffled, green-booted rider. "I might be able to scale the thing, but that would mean leaving you behind."
"Risky," his mount replied. "You know my value in certain situations -- especially the ones you court."
"True. But if it should prove the only way..."
They moved on for some time, pausing periodically to study the prominence.
"Dilvish, there was a gentler part of the slope -- some distance back," the beast announced. "If I'd a good start, I could bear you up qute a distance. Not all the way to the top, but near."
"If that should prove the only way, Black, we'll go that route," the rider replied, breath steaming before him to be whipped away by the wind. "We might as well check further first, though. Hello! What is--"
A dark form came hurtling down the side of the mountain. When it seemed that it was about to strike the ice before them, it spread pale green, batlike wings and pulled itself aloft.It circled, quickly gaining altitude, then dove toward them.
(it's a great story; good luck finding a copy anymore...)
How does it work? From first sentence to last sentence, how does it work?