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miles agent at The Knight Agency Super Member Registered Joined Oct 30, 2006 Messages 616 Reaction score 88 Location Seattle Website knightagency.net Feb 28, 2007 #1 thanks for comments. removed Last edited: Feb 28, 2007
alleycat Still around Kind Benefactor Super Member Registered Joined Apr 18, 2005 Messages 72,891 Reaction score 12,242 Location Tennessee Feb 28, 2007 #2 Is this for a humor piece?
miles agent at The Knight Agency Super Member Registered Joined Oct 30, 2006 Messages 616 Reaction score 88 Location Seattle Website knightagency.net Feb 28, 2007 #3 no, but it is a naive kid's narration
Siddow I'm super! Thanks for asking Super Member Registered Joined Jul 2, 2006 Messages 2,719 Reaction score 2,056 Location GA Feb 28, 2007 #4 I don't think it works, because it's gross. And it sound hickish, instead of like ancient Roman. Sounds like something Earl would say. Can you come up with something more appropriate for the time period?
I don't think it works, because it's gross. And it sound hickish, instead of like ancient Roman. Sounds like something Earl would say. Can you come up with something more appropriate for the time period?