Stray Clear -Song-

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this is the first song I've written in a really long time. I'm not sure if the lyrics themselves are good, but...I tried ^^; Also, sorry about the capital letters at the beginning of every line, Microsoft Word is just...stupid sometimes. ^^
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Stray Clear

Slick your hair back
And watch them cry.
It's glazing in your eyes
Like a star in the sky.


Where the hell is the hope
When you see the light fading
I'm shouting at the
Top of my lungs
And wishing to stay here


Chorus:

I'm not going anywhere
And I'm stuck in a place
I'd rather not call home.
I've breathed my last breath
And collapsed –and collapsed-
To my death.


I've heard my last voice
-heard my last voice-
and lied their emotionless.


My hopes and dreams screamed,
Beckoning my return.
If only I could hear again
I would soon overturn.


Chorus:

I'm not going anywhere
And I'm stuck in a place
I'd rather not call home.
I've breathed my last breath
And collapsed –and collapsed-
To my death.


I wish to breath
And hope to cry.
There's no more needle
In my eye
Tonight.
I see the world spin around
And realize now
I'm left alone
In the ground.


In which I breathe. (in which I breathe)
In which I hear. (in which I hear)
Holding close,
Everything that I deem dear.


I'm alive and laughing,
And nothing bad will come near.
 
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Luke flees the scene

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I'm not going anywhere
And I'm stuck in a place
I'd rather not call home.
I've breathed my last breath
And collapsed –and collapsed-
To my death.

I really liked these lines. I could relate to this, good job. I noticed something though while reading it. On the line where you said ' and lied there emotionless', I think it should be layed there. But anyway, good song.