Unzipping My Skin

I'm not sure about lyrics without music...what sort of music did you envisage going with this?

I am with Hillgate on this one-you have some powerful words and therefore thoughts here Tattered-country might be something to think about-or even Cajun-I can hear the wailin' fiddles now-of course it aint metal but it's still some nice music!

Sounds like a winner-I'd like to hear it that way

Gee, that's really good T&T. Love the way you write. Thx muchfor sharing it and hope it's a hit!

This has some great imagry and since i now know what kinda music it should go to i think it should sound great too.

my only query is in the second verse:

Nightmares killing my brain cells
Dealing with feelings I never even felt
The little boy you used to love
Is now the man you hate everything about

do you need the everything about in the last line, maybe its just me, i dunno i just dont like it, i think it sounds better in my head as just;

Nightmares killing my brain cells
Dealing with feelings I never even felt
The little boy you used to love
Is now the man you hate

But thats just my opinion everything else is great well done T&T thats two thumbs up

Sorry for arriving late to the party, TaT. Great job. This is the only line that doesn't work:

Nightmares killing my brain cells



Again, great job.




Mike