Grey

Luke flees the scene

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I just thought I'd share the first song I ever wrote. I wrote it about a year ago I think.

Grey

v1

I've felt this too long
Too long to bear
I've seen this image
Too long to not care

Every time I say I'll end this,
I still don't know why I even try
Your dead, pale face I softly kiss
I see my pain and curl up and die

Chorus

Everything's fading away, falling away
Everything turning dull and grey
Noone chooses to help me...
Why do they get to see the dark reflection I choose to be?

v2

Flowers no longer bloom...
( I hope this ends soon )
The grass is no longer green
( I wish I couldn't be seen )
I'll dissappear and you'll never find me

( Chorus )

Bridge

Skin that can't be touched,
Pain that can't be stopped
A song that can't be sung,
My rope that can't be hung

( Chorus )

I can see everything's going grey...
 

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This reads like something Evanescence would do. Very good. Welcome aboard.




Mike
 

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I agree with mike it has an evanesance feel to it, its real good, Real sad though-made me think.