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All right, I just have no idea how I should go about this.
I mean, it's not like as soon as you introduce them you can go immediately into an in-depth description of them.
Nobody wants to read that. I realize you have to add these things in over time, but exactly how should I do it?
I mean, it's not like as soon as you introduce them you can go immediately into an in-depth description of them.
"Hi," said Tom.
Tom was 29 years old, 5'1 and weighted 290 pounds. He wore pink cutoff jeans, flipflops and a long yellow rain coat. One half of his spiky hair was dyed lime green, the other orange. His favorite song was Video Killed the Radio Star and he ate absinthe-soaked Twinkies at every meal.
Nobody wants to read that. I realize you have to add these things in over time, but exactly how should I do it?
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