Hi all, this is my first post; however, I've been reading these forums for some time.
I've had my novel done for almost a year, and all of a sudden my opening line is causing me some anquish. In the following sentence, should the words "in" be replaced with "for?" "In" sounds right to me, but I'm now wondering if "for" is the correct word:
[FONT="]"Charles Vindbraum had not tasted alcohol in over thirty years, hadn’t the desire for a sip in nearly twenty..."
What do you think? Thanks for all the great posts![/FONT]
I've had my novel done for almost a year, and all of a sudden my opening line is causing me some anquish. In the following sentence, should the words "in" be replaced with "for?" "In" sounds right to me, but I'm now wondering if "for" is the correct word:
[FONT="]"Charles Vindbraum had not tasted alcohol in over thirty years, hadn’t the desire for a sip in nearly twenty..."
What do you think? Thanks for all the great posts![/FONT]