oh nice lil' collection there, I had never read Minor Arpeggios before, I LOVE that one; possibly the best I've read so far, definatly a favorite anyways. My mate Emma's with me here and she wanst to commment too so ill pass the mic.
Emma:
Hola tio! Emma here, I write poetry myself, your stuff's really good. I'm quite impressed! no self-inflicted deafmute can mutter in complaint of their deafmuteness... doesn't exactly roll of the tongue eh? good poem though! i really like the contrast you draw between the "curves" and the masculinity of the poem... it's like the curves represent the thoughts you can't express? I dunno, maybe i misinterpreted.. that's what i got though, and hey poetry and meaning thereof is in the mind of the reader eh?
anyways, well done my..er.. distant aquaintance!
em*
SWP: And back to me, well done sweets hope it goes well for you.