- Joined
- Jul 6, 2006
- Messages
- 1,546
- Reaction score
- 238
- Location
- Gothenburg, Sweden
- Website
- www.rivanacreations.com
Oh wow, am I nervous. Ok, here's the deal, I sing and write lyrics, but I don't own a piano and I don't know guitar chords (which doesn't really matter since I don't have one anyway), but I still love doing songs. I'm actually thinking of finding a musician somewhere who'd be interested in doing collabs. It sucks to just have songs and nothing to do with them y'know. Anyway, I finally decided to put up a song here (my latest). I did an a capella of it on one of my videos on youtube.com here>>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8p6zss2u5fY If anyone wants to take a look, please tell me what you think? Specifically does it sound like a rip-off of some other song you've heard? I know you too must have this problem all of the time -with so many songs in the world, how on Earth do you avoid having yours being too similar to another? You don't even have to have heard the tune before -simple mathematics say that the combinations of notes are running out, so... Yeah, if you want to listen... 'K, as those people who have read my posts before know -if I'm tired I babble. Now I'm tired and worried and thus I babble. Sorry 'bout that, where was I -yes, lyrics, right. Here you go and thanks for looking.
/Tessa
Stay
Afraid I won’t be
of much assistance.
It’s been one of those
days you know.
Afraid I won’t make for
a good shoulder
to cry on today.
Just isn’t in the cards.
But would you still hold my hand
till the pain has passed?
I just need someone there,
while it’s burning.
Could you stay close beside
and yet far enough away?
I’m asking you to stay,
so would you?
I’m not really good
at this talking
‘bout people and friends;
not my scene.
I may not have the strength
to keep up our
chatter tonight.
You’ll have to do your part.
But would you still hold my hand
till the pain has passed?
I just need someone there,
while it’s burning.
Could you stay close beside
and yet far enough away?
I’m asking you to stay,
so would you?
Have you noticed the change
in the weather?
It’s warmer than it
was last year.
It’s just like I told you,
do you remember?
A blue winter day,
that should have been so cold.
It’s time for my meds,
where’s the water?
Don’t worry my friend,
I’m all right.
You know it would take much
to make me falter.
This isn’t the day
when I go away.
But would you still hold my hand
till the pain has passed?
I just need someone there,
while it’s burning.
Could you stay close beside
and yet far enough away?
I’m asking you to stay,
so would you?
(Make my day)
/Tessa
Stay
Afraid I won’t be
of much assistance.
It’s been one of those
days you know.
Afraid I won’t make for
a good shoulder
to cry on today.
Just isn’t in the cards.
But would you still hold my hand
till the pain has passed?
I just need someone there,
while it’s burning.
Could you stay close beside
and yet far enough away?
I’m asking you to stay,
so would you?
I’m not really good
at this talking
‘bout people and friends;
not my scene.
I may not have the strength
to keep up our
chatter tonight.
You’ll have to do your part.
But would you still hold my hand
till the pain has passed?
I just need someone there,
while it’s burning.
Could you stay close beside
and yet far enough away?
I’m asking you to stay,
so would you?
Have you noticed the change
in the weather?
It’s warmer than it
was last year.
It’s just like I told you,
do you remember?
A blue winter day,
that should have been so cold.
It’s time for my meds,
where’s the water?
Don’t worry my friend,
I’m all right.
You know it would take much
to make me falter.
This isn’t the day
when I go away.
But would you still hold my hand
till the pain has passed?
I just need someone there,
while it’s burning.
Could you stay close beside
and yet far enough away?
I’m asking you to stay,
so would you?
(Make my day)
