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guy1782
12-21-2006, 01:42 PM
If I donít sleep then I wonít reap
The benefit of dreams

If I donít eat then I wonít meet
The standard of the team

If I donít listen then I wonít glisten
That is what my mama said
But if I play, then I wonít stay
I would much rather be dead

Get inside my head
Play around and youíll see
Many shades of red
Its no cup of tea

Itís not easy being me
I am more than you can see
And who would you have me be?
I would rather stick to me

jbal
12-22-2006, 03:08 AM
I read it, guy, not sure if you're wanting a critique or just throwing it out there. Got music to go with?

jbal
12-22-2006, 06:23 AM
It's a strange one guy, not sure what to make of it. It's ok, but nothing really reaches out and grabs me. When are you going to start posting some of this stuff where I can hear it? That's a way better way to judge these things than by lyrics alone.