If I don't

guy1782 · Dec 21, 2006

If I don’t sleep then I won’t reap
The benefit of dreams

If I don’t eat then I won’t meet
The standard of the team

If I don’t listen then I won’t glisten
That is what my mama said
But if I play, then I won’t stay
I would much rather be dead

Get inside my head
Play around and you’ll see
Many shades of red
Its no cup of tea

It’s not easy being me
I am more than you can see
And who would you have me be?
I would rather stick to me

jbal · Dec 21, 2006

I read it, guy, not sure if you're wanting a critique or just throwing it out there. Got music to go with?

jbal · Dec 21, 2006

It's a strange one guy, not sure what to make of it. It's ok, but nothing really reaches out and grabs me. When are you going to start posting some of this stuff where I can hear it? That's a way better way to judge these things than by lyrics alone.

If I don't

guy1782

Dreamer

jbal

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