A completely unscientific experiment

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MacAllister

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So in the interest of exploring our own writing, and better understanding the relationship between how we write and how we think--I propose an experiment.

For one week, we'll volunteer to eschew our normal voice and our favorite words and our best tricks that we rely on all the time, in our AW posts.

The catch is--we don't get to say what those tricks are. The other people playing get to TELL us what they are, based on our posting history. The point is to develop and explore our individual relationships with our words, and also to get an idea for how others perceive our writing in general terms.

We'd sign up to play here in this thread, and discuss amongst ourselves what should be off-limits for each of us, and what some of the viable alternative techniques might be. For example, someone with a tendency towards long complex sentences with big words might experiment with sentences no longer than ten words, and words no longer than two syllables--and vice versa.

This is strictly for fun and education and working on our chops as writers.



You guys game?
 
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Should I submit dclary 1.0 or dclary 2.0 as my entry?

And why aren't you sleeping? Or are you like Batman, patrolling Gotham AW at night, prowling for the evil that does not sleep?
 

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I had a terrible head injury years ago, Dave, when I was hit by a penny some mook flung from the Eiffel Tower. I haven't slept since.

Although, the Batman thing is fun. I might switch to using that as my reason. What's your excuse?
 

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Dave doesn't want his wife to know he dresses up so he only does it in the wee small hours.

As a superhero I mean. Not the French maid costume.

-Derek
 

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Sweet Chroist. I don't think I pay that enough attention to what I write in the first place.

I'm a bad little writester, that I am.
 
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Then it will be a good lesson in control, Zach. :D
 

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Also, I don't have any tricks.
:roll:

I figure today we'll hash out what we think people rely on, and what the alternatives are, and start in the morning. That gives us an entire weekend of posting without our standard tools.
 

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does this mean id have to use apostraphe's and caps??
 

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Celia Cyanide said:
okay, sounds like fun. can we trade w other ppl?

:eek:

"ppl"? is that really how i look when i say that?

i dont like this experiment.
 

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robeiae said:
Oooo...I wanna be Perks. Or Jenna.

(yes, I have some issues...back off!)

i want to be perks.

she just needs to send me some new pix so i can get the overall feel of her.

um...

i mean, so i can get a better understanding of her posting style.
 

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Bravo said:
i want to be perks.

she just needs to send me some new pix so i can get the overall feel of her.

um...

i mean, so i can get a better understanding of her posting style.
Bravo, you're broken. Lol!

ETA - but here's a new pic anyway
 
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that's almost as hot as you.

this is a tough call.

i should not be into that this much, so it's exposing some of my confusion and identity issues.
 
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MacAllister said:
For example, someone with a tendency towards long complex sentences with big words might experiment with sentences no longer than ten words, and words no longer than two syllables--and vice versa.

I'd prolly have more luck quitting smoking.
 

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For example, someone with a tendency towards long complex sentences with big words might experiment with sentences no longer than ten words, and words no longer than two syllables--and vice versa.

no need to be sly mac.

we all know this thread was really for rob. ;)
 

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I'm in. But is it restricted to OP and TIO, or are we talking about the whole board? It would be very disconcerting for those in Novel Writing, for example, to see Mr. Ray go berserk.

Is one week too long? Will it drive everyone crazy?
 

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Oooo, I'll play. If I have time. So, what's my normal style? Short sentences, I suppose. And a focus on the word "I."
 
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