Last Line of Your Novel

"The Queen is dead. Long live the Queen..."

Even having seen his body, I still doubt that he is dead.

Anyone else seeing a trend in our last lines? i.e., DEATH?

"The End"

The novel isn't quite done yet (takes a deep breath, exhales), but here's the last line so far:

She meant to kill one or both of them, and he simply stood there, unable to smile for an insane photograph, and utterly helpless to stop her.

Same situation as chaostitan.

Oooh, and I get points for being the fist person to have a last line NOT involving a) death or b) killing one or more people (chaostitan again!)

Ahem.

Gakk! I just realized I don't have it with me. I'm at my aunt and uncle's house in Brooklyn, and I didn't bring my freaking writer's notebook with me!

Oh wait, yes I did. Here it is:

Who knew? Maybe next year she would smoke pot and eat tofu. Maybe she would be named Sunshine or Daydream. Or maybe she would just be known as "Jane."

Which is actually a paragraph, and not a sentence (I know you're all thinking, "That's the LEAST of her worries") but meh. It's in it's first draft stage, and I'm not even there yet. *Grumpy face*

I'm still not there yet....to be continued.....

Ask me next year.

This novel has been put on hold so I can finish the one I've been working on since last January. In any case, the last interesting line from the NaNo novel is:

"Treasonous talk," said Lord Gideon.

To be continued....

"Kendra smiled as she clicked send."

And award goes to me for most boring last line ever. It doesn't really have an impact without the paragraph before it, oh well.

The End

Mine is incomplete and I would have shared... but it's TOO blah. Even with a caveat that it will certainly be changed, it can't be posted even with all the nice people here!

Here's mine:

I really don't need to.

"Look around Taru, this is paradise."

The crowd roared.

Whooee. I think Maggie's in love.

"Do tell."

Michael trailed a finger through the water, breaking the mirror. He finally belonged.


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Note: I don't write happy endings. Of course, now I see this is a NaNo... thread. Oops! LoL. I was tricked!

Not nano, but whatever. Mine:

When he checked the garage later, the Ferrari was gone.

from my first novel, since I'm not done with my current WIP.

The lake exists exactly the same but those who come here change; it is a constant to judge your life by.

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Uh, well mine isn't exactly grammatically correct because it is a sentence fragment, but here's the last line of my MG fantasy:

The family she had found and loved all on her own.

You can put away the tissues now. Ha ha! It's a little cheesy, but me likes it!

Got the first draft done:
Here's the last line:

As I went alone I promised that no matter where I went and for all of my life, I would take them with me.

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