Long, Long Way

jbal · Dec 9, 2006

Nice. The end is kind of ambiguous though. Can you tell I hover nearby this forum a lot?

moblues · Dec 9, 2006

I was going from memory. I'm missing a couple of verses. I'll look for my notebooks and flesh it out more. They are in boxes in my garage. Have you any idea how cold it has been in Chicago lately?

I'll find it and give you the whole piece. I'll just have to put my mittens on.

Mike

Scarlett_156 · Dec 9, 2006

I liked the other one you posted better. And yeah-- the end sort of takes it in another direction that's sort of surprising. Another verse at the end would probably fix that though.

DreamWorks · Dec 9, 2006

Mmm... nice start indeed something is missing. looking forward to seeing the rest!

WildScribe · Dec 9, 2006

I SWEAR I have heard that on the radio... or at least the long way from Memphis part...

moblues · Dec 10, 2006

WildScribe said:
I SWEAR I have heard that on the radio... or at least the long way from Memphis part...

Well, if you heard this on the radio, I better contact my attorney. I don't listen to the radio much anymore--especially country music. Mostly sports or news while I'm driving. This is over ten years old.

Mike

WildScribe · Dec 10, 2006

It's just that line. It sounds familiar. Maybe I'm thinking of Whalin's "a long way from home"... (which is way older than ten years)

moblues · Dec 12, 2006

Long, Long Way

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jbal

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Scarlett_156

asdf

DreamWorks

keep dreaming

WildScribe

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