View Full Version : Just in case you didn't think I was crazy

12-07-2006, 08:55 PM
Here ya go:

includes "The Poisonous"- an Offspring tribute track- a rap battle between demon and angel
"broth"- not for the kiddies, very explicit
"It came from the trailer park"- the closest I get to a love song
and "group hug" which I included basically because I like the guitar solo.


12-07-2006, 10:42 PM
jbal you are one talented bunny! All your songs sound ace - do you really do it all yourself? Love the grungy sound of group hug, so raw. The part where you switch from guitar to rock made me laugh out loud. so surprising. Every song has an element of pure psycho in it. I mean, pure psycho.
Now for some nitpickin (this is a critique site after all, isn't it?)
I would bring down the volume of the main voice a tad in the chorus of The Poisonous, which is the best song.
The Broth made me a bit queasy I have to say and I wasn't even listening that closely. But I guess its just one of those songs huh!
the less than perfect pitch hearing of the singer disturbs the otherwise lovely song Trailer Park - great chorus, especially
As I said, group hug made me laugh
Thnx 4 sharing, truly!

12-07-2006, 10:48 PM
Yeah, I can't sing worth a crap

12-07-2006, 11:44 PM
I just reread my post I sound so rude and dorky
I didn't mean like laugh at your song it was just surprising and fresh...
And you have a lovely baritone voice, just need to brush up the ear a bit that's all - seriously it wouldn't be that hard if you wanted to improve that u can definitely do it cause you're really not very far off
and in the other songs you can't tell for an instant - or are the other songs all rap?

12-07-2006, 11:52 PM
LOVE IT. You are hilarious.

12-08-2006, 05:33 AM
Whew! I love Trailer park song.

12-08-2006, 07:02 AM
I have a song about a trailer park couple myself. Must be it's own genre! jbal you are absolutely nuts! Love it.

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