Re: hi, cy!
Steven SITS STILL for a moment, calming down, and then RUBS
HIS EYES and GETS OUT OF BED with his STUFFED ANIMAL, a puppy
named DIRTDEVIL.
STEVEN
(to mom)
I'm up!
Steven walks to the door, holding Dirtdevil in one hand and
scratching his head with the other. Steven is a boy,
fourteen years old, with an average build but is hunched over
as always. He is around average size relatively, but isn't
quite strong.
On his DESK is...a BOTTLE OF PILLS, the words "social
anxiety" and "depression" on the label, among others. Also
on the desk is a REPORT CARD, littered with "F"s and "D"s.
All the teachers' comments read the same: Steven is a very
intelligent boy...has the ability...is not turning in
work...spends all day writing in notebook...
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What exactly do you capitalize, that will be my biggest enemy. Using this text as an example, movements in the first paragraph are capitalized, but they are not in the second paragraph. Which one is wrong? What about inanimate objects such as desks? I just leave those lowercased personally.
On a side note, don't put in too many actions that would restrict the potential actor. If the actor is doing a scene where he wakes up, wouldn't rubbing his eyes come natural?