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Obviously, a common or well-known song should probably not be in the descriptive, merely something like this:
She sang "America the Beautiful."
However, in the case of my screenplay, I have a Civil War-era song: “Lilly and Her Solider."
I have written out the entire song in the descriptive, rather than just the title.
The reason I wrote it all out is:
1. The song is somewhat obscure
2. I indicate that a certain person sings a particular stanza and then others join in.
3. The song, a Union song, is being sung by Confederate troops, who've altered some of the words to suit their side, a common practice at the time.
Also, after the song, I give a short explanation as follows:
(written in May 1863 in the North, and slightly modified by the Rebs).
Questions:
1. Is it OK to write out an entire song?
2. Is it ok to give a brief explanation?
She sang "America the Beautiful."
However, in the case of my screenplay, I have a Civil War-era song: “Lilly and Her Solider."
I have written out the entire song in the descriptive, rather than just the title.
The reason I wrote it all out is:
1. The song is somewhat obscure
2. I indicate that a certain person sings a particular stanza and then others join in.
3. The song, a Union song, is being sung by Confederate troops, who've altered some of the words to suit their side, a common practice at the time.
Also, after the song, I give a short explanation as follows:
(written in May 1863 in the North, and slightly modified by the Rebs).
Questions:
1. Is it OK to write out an entire song?
2. Is it ok to give a brief explanation?