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What would be the correct method to represent something like: "Joe's friend's car was black."

This has always irked me, and I've never gotten a clear answer. It just sounds wierd, and feels just as awkward writing it.
 

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That's correct. It's also awkward. Only way to fix it is to revise it: "Joe had a friend. His car was black."

Unfortunately, you can't tell for sure now if the car belongs to Joe or to his friend in my example. Ain't English wonderful?
 

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Joe's friend Brian had a black car.

Brian, Joe's friend, had a black car.
 

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I revised it to something like: "This is Joe and his friend. His friend's car is black."

Not a whole lot better, since I've got a possessive pronoun preceading a possessive noun, but it flows more.
 

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I assume Joe's friend has been named. If so, 'Friend's' car was black.
 

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the car of joes friend is black
 

Misnomer

What's wrong with simply "Joe's friend had a black car"?

Edit: Or, if you're introducing the friend for the first time, "This is Joe's friend, who had black car (or 'whose car was black')."
 
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black the car of joes friend is - yoda
 

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His friend's car was black.


But, I'll write it more like Medievalist, although I'd set Brian in between commas.
 
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