sorry...
...but any agent's or producer's reader would relegate it to the 'newbie' pile at first glance...here are some 'whys':
EXT.
Pescados Soñolientos Motel - Day[slug line must be all-caps]
The truck
comes rolling [the/it's 'a' truck, unless we've seen it before and have been following it here... -ing endings should next to never be used] into a gravel driveway in front of
the office of the
Pescados Soñolientos Motel(Drowsy Fish
Motel). [unless the sign has both spanish and english on it, you don't put the translation... audience won't see this, will they?...if you have to use this name for some plot reason, you can inform us of the meaning in dialog... and, since you have the name in the slug line, it doesn't belong down here, anyway!] The sign has a large, turquoise fish on it. The
paint on the sign, and on the building
is chipping away.[this means the paint has hands and is chipping something]
It’s possibly the trashiest, most miserable establishment
these men have ever seen.[there are no men... yet... so how can they see anything?]
The two men [the... no caps for characters who seem to be introduced here... if they've been introduced before and this is not the first time they're seen, names must be used] step out of the truck.
the whole thing is way too wordy and not even well-enough worded for a novel... just too many words that don't do anything but get in the way... here's one way a more seasoned screenwriter might write this scene:
EXT. MOTEL - DAY
A truck rolls into a gravel driveway, stops in front of
a seedy office. A battered, faded sign proclaims, "PESCADOS SONOLIENTOS MOTEL" over a fish with eyes at half mast and its turquoise paint peeling off like the scales on a year-old carcass.
TWO MEN get out of the truck. It's clear they'd rather be anywhere else. They take in the rundown surroundings, trade disgusted shrugs and head for the office.
...that's just one way to clean up this bit of action... some of the major basics of good screenwriting had been overlooked in your version, as you can see... i'd strongly urge you to do more reading of good scripts... i can recommend a few and also some good books on the craft...
love and hugs, maia
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