Octopusouphut
Here's a big block of action from a script I'm thinking of entering into a contest. Is it too much? Not enough? Too confusing? Could you guys tell me what you think? Thanks
Once Nathan finishes his speech, Caleb stands up from the bed and faces Nathan. He reaches in, and with a force strong enough to knock him down, kisses Nathan. At first Nathan isn't sure what's happening. Then he is overcome with the memories of all of the good times that they did indeed share. But that quickly passes, leaving Nathan frantic to get Caleb off of him. The strenght forces Nathan into the nearby wall. Leaning on the wall, Nathan finds the strength to push Caleb off of him. Caleb stands there looking at Nathan with out streched arms which pin Nathan to the wall.
When Caleb begins to speak he is almost unrecognizable. He is no longer the deeply sarcastic teen who was standing in the room before, who covered up his anger in his sarcasm. He is now consumed with anger at the fact that what he wants is not willing to become his. Hating the idea of losing his chance, he forces the idea of compliance onto his victim: Nathan.
Once Nathan finishes his speech, Caleb stands up from the bed and faces Nathan. He reaches in, and with a force strong enough to knock him down, kisses Nathan. At first Nathan isn't sure what's happening. Then he is overcome with the memories of all of the good times that they did indeed share. But that quickly passes, leaving Nathan frantic to get Caleb off of him. The strenght forces Nathan into the nearby wall. Leaning on the wall, Nathan finds the strength to push Caleb off of him. Caleb stands there looking at Nathan with out streched arms which pin Nathan to the wall.
When Caleb begins to speak he is almost unrecognizable. He is no longer the deeply sarcastic teen who was standing in the room before, who covered up his anger in his sarcasm. He is now consumed with anger at the fact that what he wants is not willing to become his. Hating the idea of losing his chance, he forces the idea of compliance onto his victim: Nathan.