Again and Again

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Intro:
More than once - I really tried.
To just imagine - what it's like.
Only moments - then it's gone.
Never stay away too long.

Safe's a present, safe is a grave.
Safe's a lady, without a name.
Safe means never, taking a chance.
On a little of this - and a little of that

Oh we've all done so much - of this and that.
Some they get bored - some never come back.
Some they get frightened - with no one to blame.
Just a kiss and a gamble - again and again

Chorus;
Oh but really - i'll never tire of these fast streets.
Maybe the bright lights. Maybe got used to the pain.
Still burns the fire - the start of favorite dark treats.
All the stime stumbling - through the again and again.
All the time stumbling - through the again and agai.


We stay fascinated - in the mirror it shows.
Hard lines on our eyes, and deep in our souls.
Like in some Russian novel
We're half hero - half crazed.
All the time stumbling - through the again and again.
All the time time stumbling - through the again and again

Oh but really, I'll never tire of these fast streets
Maybe the bright light - maybe got used to the pain.
Still burns the fireat the start of favorite dark treats.
All the time stumbling - through the again and again.
All the time stumbling - through the again and again.....
 

DreamWorks

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I don't think the message or theme comes out strongly enough
What's it about?
 

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I interpret this as one who longs to leave his home, but is dettered by the memories.

At first I thought it was about a guy trying to get the courage to propose marriage to a girlfriend.

Good beat, the message is a little obscure but that can be fixed with a proper title.

I don't have any idea what the tune would be but I think we can discount hip-hop or rap.