The story is in the present tense.
Pieces, soap, rinse. Boom! Hiss. She takes the brown pill, lies down. Sleep comes much faster then usual. The next morning she doesn’t remember what had bothered her yesterday.
Should it be "bothered" or 'had bothered?" I thought the former, but it doesn't sound right.
Pieces, soap, rinse. Boom! Hiss. She takes the brown pill, lies down. Sleep comes much faster then usual. The next morning she doesn’t remember what had bothered her yesterday.
Should it be "bothered" or 'had bothered?" I thought the former, but it doesn't sound right.
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