reph said:. . . umm, er, too many syllables . . .
We could try this:Unique said:There's a full moon right now in the sky
She sips her Manhattan, I nurse my rye
But we're at the bar
(can we fix it?)
Pthom said:We could try this:
There's a full moon right now in the sky
She sips her Manhattan and I
Nurse my rye at the bar,
Put a tip in the jar
With my other hand rubbing her thigh.
Very soon it will be Halloween!