My last two rejections:
“I am looking to take on new clients, but only with material about which I feel very strongly on a personal level. Opinions vary considerably in the business, and I’m sure another agent will respond more favorably.”
And:
Thank you for sending your manuscript to me for consideration. I really like the idea of a tarot inspired novel, but I felt the story was smaller and quieter than I hoped. (At least in the first 30 pages, which is the time I need to feel hooked.) I'm sorry to say I have to pass on this since it's not quite what I'm looking for and I feel I would have a hard time marketing it. It's charming though, and I hope you'll persist until you find the right agent for it.
I know I should be very encouraged to get this kind of response from an agent, and to a certain extent, I am. In the end though a rejection is a rejection is a rejection.
I'm sure there is some agent out there who will click with my work, but who? It's hard for me not to get depressed, because I've been close before. I've written 5 complete novels in the past 10 years, all of which have been through the submission process. I feel that my current work is my strongest novel yet, and I know that I just have to keep at it, but it hurts to be this close and still so far away.
“I am looking to take on new clients, but only with material about which I feel very strongly on a personal level. Opinions vary considerably in the business, and I’m sure another agent will respond more favorably.”
And:
Thank you for sending your manuscript to me for consideration. I really like the idea of a tarot inspired novel, but I felt the story was smaller and quieter than I hoped. (At least in the first 30 pages, which is the time I need to feel hooked.) I'm sorry to say I have to pass on this since it's not quite what I'm looking for and I feel I would have a hard time marketing it. It's charming though, and I hope you'll persist until you find the right agent for it.
I know I should be very encouraged to get this kind of response from an agent, and to a certain extent, I am. In the end though a rejection is a rejection is a rejection.
I'm sure there is some agent out there who will click with my work, but who? It's hard for me not to get depressed, because I've been close before. I've written 5 complete novels in the past 10 years, all of which have been through the submission process. I feel that my current work is my strongest novel yet, and I know that I just have to keep at it, but it hurts to be this close and still so far away.