View Full Version : Mentor needed

07-08-2006, 03:29 AM
Hi, I've decided to take the plunge and ask for a mentor to help me with my writing. I have published about 60 non-fiction (mainly sports) articles in magazines and local newspapers and written about a dozen short stories.

I am currently writing a fantasy novel based on Egyptian legends (the sun god - Ra, Osiris etc).

I am having some trouble trying to write in 3rd person pov, as the articles and short stories have mainly been in 1st person pov.

I would like someone who can read my work as I write it/or edit it, (I have written about 70,000 words so far) and offer me advice about where I am going wrong and suggestions on how to improve. I have a thick skin, but wouldn't mind some hand holding too.

Can anyone help me?

07-08-2006, 04:45 AM
I've pm'd you, hun.

Brenda Hill
08-28-2006, 10:32 AM
jvc, have you tried posting it in the Share forum? It sounds interesting.