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06-07-2006, 06:49 AM
Godfather
cant tell the difference?
i wouldn't think that you could....
...well, uh, me neither
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06-07-2006, 07:17 AM
poetinahat
well, uh, me neither
let us go then, you and i
where the wild things are
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06-07-2006, 07:31 AM
JAlpha
Where the wild things are
I feel at home with the beasts
feel my bite, fear me
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06-07-2006, 07:47 AM
Godfather
feel my bite, fear me
Fear him; JAlpha,
the king of haiku
feel my bite, fear me
Fear her; JAlpha, she is
the queen of haiku
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06-07-2006, 08:02 AM
JAlpha
Quote:
Originally Posted by Godfather
feel my bite, fear me
Fear him; JAlpha,
the king of haiku
The King of Haiku
got the syllable count wrong
don't mess with the Queen
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06-07-2006, 08:10 AM
Bret
don't mess with the Queen
her favorite phrase of late
off with poet's heads
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06-07-2006, 08:16 AM
Godfather
"off with poets heads!"
Queen J-Alpha, I'm sorry!
Mercy of haiku!
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06-07-2006, 10:02 AM
oarsman
mercy of haiku!
screeched, scratched, scrooched, scrunched, scrinched, squelched, stretched
a syllable prank
06-07-2006, 11:24 AM
P.H.Delarran
a syllable prank
Mary Poppins said it best
she's so precocious!
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06-07-2006, 12:16 PM
kdnxdr
she's so precocious,
her innocence was fleeting
in a cold lost world
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06-07-2006, 12:20 PM
Stew21
in a cold lost world
i find warmth among good friends
glass raised in a toast!
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06-07-2006, 12:31 PM
Godfather
glass raised in a toast!
this world is good and absurd
toast raised in a glass?
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06-07-2006, 12:39 PM
kdnxdr
toast raised in a glass?
an honorable esteem
can hide true candor
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06-07-2006, 05:08 PM
Godfather
can hide true candor?
nobody hides anything,
not from a smart man.
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06-07-2006, 07:04 PM
PrettySpecialGal
not from a smart man,
but from one who has much less-
who can teach us more
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06-07-2006, 07:31 PM
poetinahat
who can teach us more
than the friendly pickpocket
who gives us flowers?
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06-07-2006, 07:47 PM
pb10220
who gives us flowers
as rare as my child's fistful
of dandelions?
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06-07-2006, 08:02 PM
P.H.Delarran
of dandelions
and honey, the fatal tea
washed down his last meal
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06-07-2006, 08:19 PM
kdnxdr
washed down his last meal,
made his peace with his maker
and walked the long mile
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06-07-2006, 11:01 PM
Sireen
And walked the long mile
With raven hair, wings unfurled
her passing echos
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06-07-2006, 11:08 PM
P.H.Delarran
her laughter echoes
frame by frame sweet memories
family slide show
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06-07-2006, 11:52 PM
Sireen
Family slide show
still against the inky night
freeze framed memory
06-08-2006, 03:45 AM
Godfather
freeze framed memory,
can pass some of your exams.
it don't make you smart.
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06-08-2006, 07:05 AM
oarsman
it don't make you smart
heapings of couch potatoes
that ain't chopped liver
06-08-2006, 07:32 AM
Godfather
that ain't chopped liver,
boy thats gone-off sheep bladder.
please be joking man...
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6-08-2006, 09:41 AM
drachin8
Please be Joking Man
or Woman Who Laughs at Wind.
I need a punchline.
06-08-2006, 09:50 AM
oarsman
I need a punchline
Walmart wants smiley face rights
can't make them happy!
06-08-2006, 11:07 AM
Sireen
Can't make them happy
finally comprehending
no note left behind
06-08-2006, 11:12 AM
ddgryphon
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06-08-2006, 11:23 AM
JAlpha
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06-08-2006, 11:38 AM
Sireen
leading us to light
pinpoint clarity ahead
sunlit paradise
06-08-2006, 12:51 PM
drachin8
sunlit paradise
ebbs and flows on azure waves
through my memories
06-08-2006, 02:39 PM
kdnxdr
through my memories
I longingly look for you
my sweet warm solace
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06-08-2006, 02:45 PM
Jabs
my sweet warm solace
my girl with the big boobies
oh how I love them
06-08-2006, 03:01 PM
kdnxdr
oh how I love them
sweet infant satisfaction
is all that I need
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06-08-2006, 05:09 PM
Godfather
is all that i need,
a kiss? slightly physical,
i just want what is
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06-08-2006, 07:10 PM
PrettySpecialGal
i just want what is
coming to me...but somehow
I don't think it will
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06-08-2006, 10:16 PM
Sireen
I don't think it will
stop before it reaches her
sandstorm from the west
06-08-2006, 10:40 PM
ddgryphon
Sandstorm from the west
Like an earthen tsunami
Devouring all
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06-08-2006, 11:22 PM
P.H.Delarran
devouring all
summer crop yields destruction
plague of grasshoppers
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06-08-2006, 11:27 PM
Bret
plague of grasshoppers
the sharecroppers turn their eyes
to the unknown west
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06-09-2006, 12:08 AM
Shwebb
to the unknown west
and the east and north and south
I spin, deciding.
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06-09-2006, 12:10 AM
P.H.Delarran
I spin, deciding
that gravity is no fun
I fall down laughing
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06-09-2006, 02:58 AM
pb10220
I fall down laughing
convulsed in giggles while he
smiles innocently
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06-09-2006, 03:14 AM
Godfather
smiles innocently
wraps her air around your self,
but she looks perfect
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06-09-2006, 07:11 AM
oarsman
but she looks perfect
even the draping Ash trees
can't veil her lush hues
06-09-2006, 07:41 AM
Godfather
can't veil her lush hues,
nor can anyone of us
she is strong and great
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06-09-2006, 09:10 AM
ddgryphon
She is strong and great
Powerful when we are weak
We call her Mother
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06-09-2006, 09:22 AM
P.H.Delarran
We call her Mother
lush bounty, nourishment, death
her gift to mankind
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06-09-2006, 10:05 AM
kdnxdr
her gift to mankind
comfort as no other gives
woman at her best
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