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I'm writing a MG fantasy which features a large beaver-like creature as a supporting character, and would like some advice.
The MC is a young boy who's gone back in time to early medieval Wales with a talking squirrel who serves as his mentor (long story), and is trying to get back to his own time. Unfortunately, the path to the "doorway home" is blocked by a rising stream or river in flood; the flood turns out to be caused by a giant beaver-like creature building a dam. (While it looks like a giant beaver, it's actually a creature from the Welsh Otherworld called an "addanc" - an actual mythical Welsh water-creature which has been linked to beavers - which entered this part of Wales, fleeing trouble back home, and decided to settle here. Its main differences with real-life beavers are its size and it can speak, though with a simple vocabulary. Apart from that, I'd like its physical appearance and habits to be as close to real-world beavers as I can manage.)
The boy and the squirrel meet with the addanc, in an attempt to persuade it to build its dam somewhere else (not only because the rising water level from its dam serves as an obstacle to them, but also because it threatens to flood the area) - with some difficulty; the addanc is stubborn for a while about this being the place where it wants to live. (It isn't hostile towards the humans who'd be flooded out, but sees that as "not my problem".) My idea was that they'd finally discover a suitable large pond or lake for it, close enough for it to travel to, and persuade it to relocate there.
The addanc, by the way, is single - no mate or offspring.
To anyone here who's an expert on beavers, how well does this work? I'd welcome your ideas and support in developing this part of the story.
The MC is a young boy who's gone back in time to early medieval Wales with a talking squirrel who serves as his mentor (long story), and is trying to get back to his own time. Unfortunately, the path to the "doorway home" is blocked by a rising stream or river in flood; the flood turns out to be caused by a giant beaver-like creature building a dam. (While it looks like a giant beaver, it's actually a creature from the Welsh Otherworld called an "addanc" - an actual mythical Welsh water-creature which has been linked to beavers - which entered this part of Wales, fleeing trouble back home, and decided to settle here. Its main differences with real-life beavers are its size and it can speak, though with a simple vocabulary. Apart from that, I'd like its physical appearance and habits to be as close to real-world beavers as I can manage.)
The boy and the squirrel meet with the addanc, in an attempt to persuade it to build its dam somewhere else (not only because the rising water level from its dam serves as an obstacle to them, but also because it threatens to flood the area) - with some difficulty; the addanc is stubborn for a while about this being the place where it wants to live. (It isn't hostile towards the humans who'd be flooded out, but sees that as "not my problem".) My idea was that they'd finally discover a suitable large pond or lake for it, close enough for it to travel to, and persuade it to relocate there.
The addanc, by the way, is single - no mate or offspring.
To anyone here who's an expert on beavers, how well does this work? I'd welcome your ideas and support in developing this part of the story.