Here's three sentences to give you a little context:
She looked out the window. A giant heating vent on another hospital building roof belched steam into the gray sky. She turned back to her father.
A woman is lying in a hospital bed. She looks out the window and sees another buiding's roof and the steam coming out. Anyway, I just got weirded out with this sentence:
I tried all kinds of versions like:
A giant heating vent on another hospital building's roof...
I just wasn't sure. Anybody know a good way to go? Thanks.
She looked out the window. A giant heating vent on another hospital building roof belched steam into the gray sky. She turned back to her father.
A woman is lying in a hospital bed. She looks out the window and sees another buiding's roof and the steam coming out. Anyway, I just got weirded out with this sentence:
A giant heating vent on another hospital building roof belched steam into the gray sky.
I tried all kinds of versions like:
A giant heating vent on another hospital building's roof...
I just wasn't sure. Anybody know a good way to go? Thanks.