My heroine is threatened by a gang. Her hero is amply capable, but even he gets overwhelmed. She chooses to act. The only weapon she knows how to use with any facility is a cue ball on a chain.
But I can't seem to write the scene properly. It always comes out either tepid, clinical, or a boringly slow choreography.
Can anyone point me to good written examples of a street fight scene that I may study?
But I can't seem to write the scene properly. It always comes out either tepid, clinical, or a boringly slow choreography.
Can anyone point me to good written examples of a street fight scene that I may study?